The feedback that stood out to me most last time was positive reception on my updated hook, so I kept that in there! Otherwise, besides shortening my pitch for the sake of timing, for this elevator pitch I focused on presentation. I noticed in my past pitches that I moved around a lot and constantly had my eyebrows stuck in this weird surprised state, and while the assignment encourages you to be energetic, that probably doesn't coincide with being obnoxious. This third time around I was a lot comfier in front of the camera, and I think it shows.
No comments:
Post a Comment